Revision Matrix

Revision Matrix

Before	After
The Importance of Communication	Communication in the Business of Photography
As we talked through out the interview he kept repeating similar things over and over again, he kept going back to how important communication is with your clients.	As we talked through out the interview he kept coming back to how important communication is using different conventions to inform your client on the project.
The first interaction you have with a client is most likely going to be them viewing your work on your website.	The first interaction photographers have with a client is most likely going to be when future clients are viewing your work on your website or social media anywhere where your work can be viewed to the open public.
In week 5 reading it talks about	In the lecture we had week 5 we learned how
In the written artifact he gave me showed different genres of questions he prepares	In the email document he gave me it showed different genres of questions he prepares
No evidence	Questions like “how did you hear about me?” and “ Can you send me a layout of the idea you had for the project?”
After the meeting and all the questions are asked he sends a email to client that goes over what they talked about in the meeting, this email is taken as their written contract.	After the meeting and all the questions are asked, he sends an email to the client that covers what they discussed about in the meeting.
photography, photographers use	Photography; photographers use
Greg mentioned it’s important to take notes during the shoot	Greg mentioned it’s important to take notes during the shoot these notes include lighting techniques, specific locations and ideas the client had
The final step in a job is writing the invoice at the end of the shoot	The final step photo shoot is writing the invoice at the end of the shoot.